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There is this solemn glow in a star
So real you can almost hold
Yet so untouchable and so far
Lost somewhere in the days of old

Yet there are thousands in the sky
Reminescent of these city lights
A mural of things long since gone by
Inspiring greatness in these summer nights

It's odd now, gazing at the past
In all their heavenly grace
Wondering if this moment will last
As they illuminate the tears on my face
©2003-2009 ~whisper44
:iconwhisper44:

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I'm lonely /sigh, where IS everyone...

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:iconkikster:
i like this.. very good. stars are sad in a way.. looking at things long gone. good job!
:iconrudhira:
*Hugs* Im sorry that your lonely.
But the way you express it was beautiful.
I couldnt decide which line of imagrey i adored most.
I love them all.
Beautiful words.
:heart:
:icongrungeguitarist:
As Rudhira said beautiful words. I loved how well you displayed emotion in this. Excellent rhyme scheme too. Keep writing
:icondistopia:
Very well written friend. my favorite line is, "inspiring greatness in these summer nights." i also like the solitude you bring out in a single star. :rose:

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